Talk:Feng Nu/@comment-92.105.246.132-20201128142455

Um... that description of her body doesn't sound very objective. An 'exquisite body'? 'Beautiful eyes'? A 'thrilling beauty'?

Either you should put it it quotes if it's an excerpt from the book, or say 'Character A considers her to have an exquisite body' instead of claiming 'she has an exquisite body'. The way it's currently written is too subjective.